All Comments on 'Border Town Ch. 01'

This story was really amazing nd I can't wait to read further parts.

Hope to can read them soon.

I think you have done well to whet my appetite and I do look forward to more!

Absolutely well done. You are one hell of a writer.

Well written and entertaining. Looking forward to more

You surely do know how to get a reader's heart pounding. I admire your writing skills but I admire even more your ability to tell a thrilling story.

It was an old story, because sadly that Mexico is gone with all the drug trafficking. I look forward to Barbie screwing the Mexican man.

Loved it...... more of the wife letting go.....

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for bringing it back to life and sharing it with us.

Is an unfinished story. So while you had a start to a decent story, no stars can be given to an unfinished one. Shame on you. You get an F.

One of the very best.

Thank you.