All Comments on 'A Satiny Halloween Pt. 01'

A friend of Mrs. Wentworth? I miss her.

What a pile of crap.

Missing words and shit grammar. Learn your or you're.

It appears that Chris will get lucky in the next chapter as Linda had planned! I wonder if there will be an FFM when Janet/Marie returns! Lots of possibilities. Looking forward to the continuation of the story. Rated it 5 stars.

Your panty-boy seductions rival Agatha Christie's murder plots in cleverness! And your bravura character sketches and psychological insights into character are brilliant. More, more!

A suggestion--a more sinister motive, like an inheritance in the balance, might heighten the drama.

almost a 5 star rating. like how Chrissy's panties got wet. waiting for more

I really disliked this. It's just a fantasy dump. Characters change personalities far too often with lazy explanations. Ok it's a fetish fantasy and I have little problem with that perhaps even Parental manipulation so maybe we shouldn't expect a coherent plot. Just as well as we didn't get one. Just to be sure I sneaked a peek at the latest chapter published. It hasn't got any better 1 star