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"We'll see."
She wrapped her long arms around all three and squeezed her swollen belly and breasts against him. "Dang, how I hate it when you're not here. Even for a few days. I just feel so...empty. Have I told you lately how much I love you and who is the most important person in my life?"
Smiling, "Yes, I believe it was in the text you sent this morning." He squeezed the little ones against her and they kissed." She sighed. Every breath was filled with Jackson--wrapped in his cocoon.
- COMMENTS
servant11139 minutes agoGood tale and I love how you do dialogue. Uneven and in parts chaotic. The whole panic 5 day trek frankly didn’t make sense. Everything from the beginning of that trek is more of a pastiche of sketch story elements with little connection. Really abrupt ending consisting of disconnected pieces that seem unrelated and unexplained
4 stars
Anonymous2 days agoThank you for the story. I liked it, but it feels a bit raw, as in unpolished. I apologize but I can't explain it better. The things I didn't like: unmarked scene breaks make reading it really confusing and annoying; you got the story to the best point where they should work on their reconciliation and introduced Wren, an interesting character, but you just cut it off with a short, abrupt ending that actually doesn't say anything about their life except implying he's successful and she's "barefoot and pregnant".
Anonymous19 days agoThe family repartee alone was worth the read. Vivid imagery and interesting characters. Strong story telling skills, but quite a few minor errors. Overall, it was a very enjoyable read.
