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Click here"This is amazing." He breathes deeply, inhaling her scent. She sees his cock is standing up again. Oh god, does she want to feel him inside her, but she decides to let him explore a bit more first. His finger slides in and out a few times, then he slips his middle finger in as well. Beth reaches down and starts rubbing her clit, making little circles around it. Mark stares for a moment, watching what she's doing, before he leans in and licks her there.
"Ohhhh, yes, that's it, Mark. Just like that." Beth encourages him as his tongue traces little circles around her swollen nub, his fingers working her. She can feel an orgasm building quickly, "Don't stop. Oh yes, yes." She moans, holding his head where it is, as a wave of pleasure erupts, her vagina spasms on Mark's fingers, fluid running out. "Oh, that was good, but I think you know what we need to do now..." Mark looks up at her expectantly. He pulls his fingers from her love canal, licking her fluids from them as he stands up, his erection pointing at her. With one hand, Beth pulls him closer, the other guides him into her warm entrance. Mark's eyes close slightly as he slowly slides into her, until he is buried to the hilt.
"You feel so good inside me."
"Ohh, wow, this is..." Mark is lost for words, standing there fully penetrating his neighbor.
"You can move around a bit, slowly at first though." Beth puts her hands on his hips, guiding him at first with his thrusts, then letting him go as he starts kissing her neck. They wrap their arms around each other, holding tight, breathing heavily as they kiss each other, joined at the hips. Beth could feel him inside her, realising how much she missed this as she rocked her hips in rhythm with his thrusting. She could feel him pull almost all the way out before slamming all the way back in, their skin slapping with each impact. Running her hands through his hair, she hoped he could last long enough considering it was his first time. "Fuck me, you feel so good, keep fucking me."
"Oh god, Beth, oh, you feel..." Panting, Mark could only look in her eyes, she could see the animal lust burning within him as he kept plunging in and out of her. Beth could feel him bottoming out with each thrust and it was like a little slice of heaven, feeling him lose himself in this moment.
"Cum for me, Mark. I want you to cum."
"But..."
"Don't worry, just fill me with your fucking cum. I want to feel it inside me." His thrusting became shorter and more frenzied, she could feel his body tensing, sensing his orgasm was nearing, she wrapped her legs around his waist, her arms pulling him tight against her. She wanted to feel him explode inside her, knowing he would be hers if he did.
"Oh, god, oh, I'm..." He let out a moan as he stopped thrusting for a moment, his body tensing, then releasing as Beth felt the warm stickiness of his seed blasting into her warm depths.
"Yes, that's it. Fill me with your cum." She whispered in his ear. Mark's eyes were closed as he leaned against her, stopping his movements as she felt the last of his throbbing, his member slipping from her with a sucking sound. "Oh, that was delightful." Beth looked at him, studying his reaction. His eyes appeared a bit glazed, yet his face was serene.
"Wow, that was awesome." He says, barely audible.
"I'm going to have to find lots of things for you to come over and help me with now."
Anonymous is right that talking about what the characters are feeling draws readers in. S/he is wrong, however, that the first part of the story was boring. Quite the opposite. The son lusting after his mother and masturbating while the hot neighbor watches sets the right tone for the story.
You dropped two gems that you don't explore that could provide new directions for the story. The first, obviously, is the sexual tension with your mother. You already have her looking sexy in the garden, so the seeds are sown for you to have a sexual liaison. There's good reason that she might wonder why you're spending so much time with Beth, which provides an opening for her to find out what's going on, and become jealous, start teasing you with sexier clothes, who knows?
Secondly, you mention your sister in connection with your open door. Her curiosity may get the better of her as she sees you lusting after your mother. Another productive story line.
Thanks for your story.
Oldmoose
Now keep the story going. I would enjoy reading more of this lads adventures with the sexy next door lady.
At the beginning, you TELL too much. "She was this. He did that."
It's boring. Best if we get the subject's thoughts.
That pulls the reader into the story.
The verb tense also needs changing.
And in the next chapter I'm sure she needs her pipes cleaned and a lot of work making sure her back door opens wide
Thanks for a good read, so she needs a new
switch for a light? turn the juice off at the fuse
box first, after you get the new switch in,check
her box.