- Erotic Poetry
- To a Naughty Gentleman
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Click hereOh my! You've woken so excited, sir!
I wonder at your hardness and your need!
Should I, dressed as your love pet, as you stir,
Kneel down next to your bed and gently plead
For your permission for my hands to stray
Into my pretty panties, so you'll see
And enjoy, as my fingers gently play;
As I pull back material, feel free
To wrap your manly hand around my wrist,
And please control my movements, so you make
Me wetter every second - who'd resist
This masterful control, that makes me shake
And gifts me all this pleasure - I'm delighted
That you have woken up, sir, so excited...
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerover 6 years agosanishen
I read your post on PF&D, so I decided to read your poem for myself.
True confession: I’m partial to the “non-erotic” category, but that’s because I think writing erotic poetry is harder to write.
I have mixed feelings about “woken up” in the last line, preferring “awaken” perhaps because the hard “k” is sandwiched between the softer “w” and “n.” On the other hand, given the dom-sub theme, maybe it does’nt matter, just something to think about.
Nor would I become a slave (pardon the pun) of the metrics in iambic pentameter. If I’m not mistaken, even Shakespeare started a line once in a while with a spondee.😉
I look forward to reading more of your work.
sanishenover 6 years agoAuthorThose who lack the courage of conviction
And feel they have to hide identity
Should learn that their cretinous addiction
To troll-like comments will not worry me
N.S.
