- Erotic Poetry
- The Monster Roars Into the Night
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While deep in the darkest hours she waits..
upon stone walls and the garden gate...
the moon kisses each crevice of the rock that caresses
her reclining body, moon glistening on tresses.
her naked form touched by pale moonlight
she feels not the cold, but embraces the night
within her the fire keeps the chill at bay
and her arms raise to the moon, her hips begin to sway.
the song in her soul is one of heat in the night
of his hands on her neck, soul chilling fright
but his low menacing growl, replaced by his soft laugh
his hand loosens and her neck and grips her bare ass.
He picks her up to straddle his beast
he climbs on behind her, naked flesh on the seat.
The monster roars into the night and carries them both away
he impales her soft pussy, night turns into day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agonice tale, I thought the ending was a bit abrupt--wanted something else to happen beyond sunrise. But I am weird that way.
Good to read you, keep it up.
normal jeanalmost 15 years agoan excellent story told here. There are a few spots that are too long, they interrupt the flow that you had going on strong. The one spot that sticks out is --
<i>the moon kisses each crevice of the rock that caresses</i>.
If you delete " each crevice of" you stay on track, makes it easier to read and absorb.
also, I think you might want to reread the next line here, and reconsider your word choices as it is rather awkward as is in the italicized part.
his hand loosens <i>and</i> her neck and grips her bare ass.
I have enjoyed reading you and see great potential in your writing. Keep up the good work!!
