Slave to Pain V2.0

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F/f pain slave
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Sue extended her thumb, looking for a ride.
The night was cold; she needed to get inside.
On this lonely, old road there weren't many cars.
In the clear sky above she could now see the stars.

'Neath her skimpy halter and short cut-off jeans
Was a luscious, curving body that provided her means
Of enticing male drivers to pick up the girl,
With hopes for a quick, little back-seat whirl.

Then headlights appeared and the large, sleek car stopped.
Sue slowly approached as her thumb she dropped.
A slim form appeared and Sue started to speak.
Too quickly - a rag on her face, of ether it did reek.

Up from the darkness her mind tried to fight.
It all seemed a dream - a nightmare - a fright.
From the car she was carried; into a mansion she went.
Through dark, gloomy rooms and finally to the basement.

Soon she awoke and slowly looked around.
Behind her back her hands were tightly bound.
Before her stood a woman, leather-clad from toes to head.
"You may call me Mistress Marilyn," the dark-haired woman said.

"I own this place and now I own you, dear slave.
"The torture of young girls is the passion I crave.
"You will learn to drink piss, my body you'll lick,
"And desire all the pain that I care to inflict."

Around Sue's neck was buckled a silver strap,
To that Ms. Marilyn clipped a leash with a snap.
To a brightly lit torture room, like a dog, Sue was led.
There were strange holes in the floor and chains overhead.

Even in this cold room Sue could feel the sweat drip.
With a slap 'cross Sue's face, Ms. Marilyn yelled "Strip!"
"Don't hit me, I'll do it." And her boots came off first.
But the icy cold floor on bare feet was the worst.

Then her large, creamy breasts were exposed to the cool air.
Hardening, pink nipples caused Ms. Marilyn to stare.
No panties 'neath her shorts, Sue's cunt was revealed.
Naked 'fore her Mistress, her fate was now sealed.

"Please don't hurt me.", to the woman, Sue pleaded.
"But of course I'll hurt you, you're what I've needed.
"You're here to suffer all the torture I inflict
"For my pleasure, and believe me I am very strict."

Sue's mouth was then stuffed with a large, rubber ball;
Efficiently gagged she could make no sound at all.
Her hands were pulled up, fingers locked in silver rings;
The chains were then raised and she was trapped by the things.

Her fingers tightly splayed and arms spread out wide,
Sue knew she would suffer; it was too late to hide.
Ten rings then rose from the floor near her feet,
Each locked 'round a toe to make her bondage complete.

Sue's feet were spread out by four feet or more;
Her body tautly stretched 'tween the ceiling and floor.
"This bitch is crazy!", was Sue's only thought,
As she wiggled and squirmed in her bonds as she fought.

"Now it's time for the whip.", she heard Marilyn say.
She selected a strap and stepped up to play.
Sue jerked forward as the blow landed with a crack.
Fingers and toes cried. Fire streaked 'cross her back.

Thirty red welts soon crisscrossed white skin.
Marilyn breathed, "Now your ass, let's begin."
Quite suddenly Sue's ass exploded with pain
And she screamed though the gag had muffled her refrain.

She wished that her Mistress would please take a rest.
Drool was now oozing down her chin to each breast
Mixing with hot tears that flowed from her eyes;
Amazed, she felt pussy juice flow down both thighs.

How could this be? The searing pain from behind
Must be driving her crazy; mixing up her mind.
But her nipples were hard and her pussy on fire
And sensations ran deep; she was hot - a live wire.

Twenty lashes later, Ms. Marilyn just quit;
And reached around Sue to put a squeeze on each tit.
Then suddenly a finger was jabbed in her cunt
And all Sue could do was let out a mute grunt.

Marilyn gloated, "Ha! You're already wet!
"And I haven't even gotten to the most fun part yet.
"Now it's time to punish your pussy and your tits."
All Sue could think was, "I'm going to lose my wits!"

Her tits burned with fire as the wide black strap struck.
She lost all control and 'gainst her bonds she did buck.
She watched her meaty breasts as they bobbed up and down;
After fifty lashes only red-purple streaks could be foun'.

Then a sharp upward stroke laced her pussy with pain.
'Gainst the rings on her fingers and toes she did strain
To arch her pussy out to meet the kiss of each lash.
The warmth of the pain fed the fire in her gash.

Then Marilyn stopped and went to fetch something new.
Sue's eyes grew quite large; her anxiety grew, too,
When she saw the metal clamps with the very sharp teeth
She knew where they'd be used - her tits and regions beneath.

The left nipple was first; the pain it did sear.
Another clamp opened, to the right bud came near.
Were her nipples cut off? She thought that they were.
Then the pain it did ebb, spreading fire throughout her.

Then her inner pussy lips were next to feel the bite.
And Marilyn took a switch and whipped with all her might,
Crisscrossing her breasts and into her moist cleft.
Whipping up and then right and then to the left.

As Sue came close to climax, one like never before,
Marilyn paused to snap on one clamp more
Right onto Sue's clit (which felt as hard as a rock)
And her whole body burned as from electrical shock.

Her pussy did clench; entering sensory overload;
Saliva was dripping; her pussy juice flowed;
Each stroke of the whip; the pinch of each clamp;
She gyrated her hips like a strip-teasing tramp.

On Sue's nipples and clit, Marilyn directed the whip,
In an effort to snap off, to knock off each clip.
Sue bucked and jerked wildly, as they finally flew,
In an orgasmic burst, so incredible, so new.

Released from her bondage Sue laid on the floor.
Her gag was removed. Now what was in store?
Her mouth was then covered with wet pussy lips.
"Suck, slave!", was commanded, Marilyn's hands on her hips.

Sue eagerly licked and frantically sucked
Soon Marilyn came as her whole body bucked.
"Very good, slave. I think that you'll do.
"I will now put my permanent marks on you."

On a leather covered table, Sue was then strapped,
Wrists, arms, ankles and thighs tightly trapped.
Spread-eagled she was as Marilyn came in
With a tray holding rings and long needles, though thin.

"You should know what will happen before I begin.",
Marilyn said to her slave with a shit-eating grin.
"I'll pierce your body with this needle and then
"Place the rings through the holes, maybe nine or ten."

Sue's mouth was then stuffed with a gag in a harness.
"Where to put the rings? I'll bet you can't guess."
Sue only whimpered. Unfortunately she could.
"No? That's okay, they're going to look really good."

"First one through each nipple, each inner lip gets two,
"Three for each outer lip and your clit gets one, too.
"And a ring of one inch through the septum of your nose.
"After that? Who knows? We'll just see how it goes"

Sue's pussy was leaking and her nipples got hard.
"I'm crazy! I'm excited! About my body being marred?"
Marilyn approached and pinched Sue's right nipple.
As the needle sunk in she felt her whole body ripple.

The rings in her nipples were a diameter of two inches
And she imagined the Mistress connecting them to winches.
The lips of Sue's pussy then Ms. Marilyn did pierce.
When the needle went through her nose, the pain was quite fierce.

But when the needle was stuck through poor Sue's stiff clit
She finally passed out; sunk to the bottom of a black pit.
A few minutes later she woke up to see
Her cunt hair all lathered and being shaved carefully.

'Round her neck Marilyn placed a collar of leather.
She was led to a mirror; hanging chains for a tether.
Her hands raised and chained, she was left there to view
Her final degradation. What else could she do?

Silver rings that were dangling from nipples and nose,
From clean shaven pussy lips and clit - she loved those!
Naked and gagged with a harness so tight,
What she saw now was truly a magnificent sight.

"Today we will test how much pain you can take."
Sue was strapped to an X-frame and she started to shake.
Spikes under her feet made her stand on her toes.
Marilyn said, "Are you ready? Here goes!"

To the rings in Sue's nipples were hooked cables of steel.
As her tits were stretched out her head started to reel.
Thin cones of tense flesh are what her breasts had become.
She strained for a breath; her arms going numb.

To the rings in her pussy lips Marilyn then tied
Thin cords which she pulled down and stretched to each side
Where she tied off the cords to eye bolts in the floor.
Sue strained from the pressure; knew she couldn't take much more.

But Marilyn's plan included even more pain
And she hooked to Sue's nose ring a very short chain.
The chain was pulled down; with Sue's chin on her chest
She could see what was coming. This would be a real test.

Her clit was stretched out; the connection was made.
She would suffer severely if her attention did fade.
Then a blow to Sue's nipples from Marilyn's switch
Caused a jerk; checked herself: "Don't move a twitch!"

Sue fought to stand still as the switch struck and struck.
She was completely exposed and unable to duck.
Then right from her clit she felt an electric thrill run
Throughout her body. The pain had become fun.

Marilyn noticed that Sue's cunt was quite wet
So she got a small box that was lined with velvet.
It held six inch long needles, a dozen or two.
She reached into the box and took out a few.

She put the needles to Sue's tits and pushed them in deep.
Sue jerked in her bondage; new agony made her weep.
To the meat of each breast, two more needles were sent.
Then through her aureole, in two directions they went.

Then straight in each nipple, just missing the rings,
To the heart of her breasts, then Marilyn twisted the things.
The pain was white-hot as it rushed from each tit
Throughout her whole body to explode in her clit.

The mistress then took two more needles in one hand.
With her whip in the other the blows started to land
On Sue's pussy lips - stretched out and tight -
Then Marilyn noticed that the time was just right.

At the edge of an orgasm dangled poor Sue
Then she felt needles skewer her clit right in two.
O'er the edge, into bliss, as if into a dark cave.
And she knew she'd do anything to be Marilyn's pain slave.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Such effort!

Effective though sing song style, I was wondering when Santa Claus would arrive but somehow I got to the end. Wow you are a sick puppy! It is not an improvement on the "Story of O" but you labored so long and hard you deserve a nipple ring of your own. Oh you have one? Good.

Pauline Reage 3rd

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