Philosophy in midst of Argument

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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as we argue forcefully my antagonist & i
suddenly mused me " why? why? why ??????"
one day we shall both turn to dust
arguin' in anger , begotten by lust
to win the argument win, win win
to any depth both can sink --sin, sin , sin
one day none of us will be here---
the Solar Milky way too will go so
Harken my dear
by losin' an argument we might lose face
but we are just 2 future dead bodies
futilely interactin' in Interstellar Space .....!

Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
1201 , let's have an agreement : you don't comment on my poetry &

I will return the favour to you !

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
Grumpy Grouch ?!?

Ash, I gave you a five?????

this shows a little effort, a little though, your last two where bumper stickers, your comments are facebook, and by extension of your argument, responding to anything like this is a waste of electrons

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
Prof. 1201 , this is not on your beloved Iambic Pentametre , is that why you're bein' a

Grumpy Grouch ?!?

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
by extension of the argument

what is the use of anything, which sometimes explains some of the "poetry" you post, the so-called "exuberant" comments, the non thought, so this poem is an oxymoron?

Who is fooling who? Here is a five, wonder what is the cosmic significance?

excuse me, should read significance???????

fakir

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
ahhh

if only drunk people thought that way my life would have been a lot easier,

nice little internal monologue about the futility of arguing, but passion often overrules good sense in reality. I like this one Ash

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by losin' an argument we might lose face

but we are just 2 future dead bodies

futilely interactin' in Interstellar Space .....!

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