O Children of Gaza

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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o Children dying in Gaza , what can I write ?
To make the senseless killings stop .......
I pray to God , never to hear again
A bereaved Gazan Mother's sob ..........

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
A write to right a wrong

The pen is mightier than the sword...allegedly!

So, so sad

MagnetronMagnetronover 9 years ago

O Children of Gaza

If I were a Nuclear Warhead

Israel would be toast

Bibi's backyard a sheet of glass

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years agoAuthor
OldBear you are right , i was too emotional & put Gazan in front of Mother .

I was feeling the Malayasian airliner was hogging all the Media Circus while these kids were treated as second class citizens of the World !?! But my anger affected the aesthetics of the Poem which went South both Quality-wise as well as Geographically from Ukraine to Palestine ??!!! Sorry ........

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 9 years ago
I think

I would like it better if it were a "bereaved mother's cry" without the specific. Lot of crying going on there, for generations and I suspect for generations more. Nicely done, Ash.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 9 years ago

Cogent, Ash, not over extended. The near rhymes work well. Nice but sad.

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