...non-feelingness

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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events ......hormones ....feelings...
create misery ...this ...that ...this
non-feelingness is the best ........
pure ...sheer ....bliss

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years agoAuthor
Legerdemer first of all a very big Thanks for taking time to comment

in spite of your duties as admin of Poetic Challenge Sept.'15 .

Your " arouses " works excellently & the Maestro himself has certified so !!!

% stars for your comment , Leger !!!!

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 8 years ago

I really like Mer's suggestion; wish I had thought of it.

legerdemerlegerdemerover 8 years ago
Nice!!

A possible suggestion in response to gm's exhortation: "arouse misery" - maybe. There's some sonic similarity there with the "sz" sound. Thoughtful, indeed.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years agoAuthor
GM , first off Thank You for liking this !!!

My earlier version had " leads to " instead of creates so would that be more alliterative ? You tell me .

& yes I am hinting at Nirvikalpa Samadhi here so this is a Meditative state or a stage achieved vide Raj-Yoga ( you know when you have stilled your Monkey Mind to absolute Thoughtlessness !)

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years agoAuthor
@Wakin'Down : thank you for liking this

A space / zone of thoughtlessness / feelinglessness / emotionlessness is called Nirvikalpa Samadhi & is achieved by regular Meditation by the process called Raj-yoga : the yoga which is popular in USA is actually Hatha- Yoga or physical Yoga .

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