Missed call.....

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Was watching Ant-Man @ Multiplex hall
There was no Wifi ,
So could'nt take a Whatsapp call
An ordinary mobile call would have come thru'
Sometimes Technology trips us up.....
& makes us fall ??!

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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tazz317tazz317over 8 years ago
OR A PHONE SOLICITOR PITCHES

and we still have the glitches. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years agoAuthor
Pel , how would this sound ( in the 4th & 5th lines):---

An ordinary call would have come thru'----

Sometimes Hi-tech makes a fool of me 'n you !?

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years agoAuthor
@Pel. Thanx for compliments.....&

Honey ....the movie is sci-Fi , great & worth watching !!

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 8 years ago
Sometimes Technology trips us up..... & makes us fall ??!...

...on so many different levels, on and off the screen

Clever Ash

and should this come with a film spoiler alert too?

pelegrinopelegrinoover 8 years ago

Very true, Ash!

I would go as far as to say even electricity can be an enemy sometimes.

You also made very good acoustic music to my ear with your 1-3-7 rhyme.

5ed.

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