- Erotic Poetry
- Love Crimes
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Click hereSome older men just understand
The way time slows, once each has planned
His rendez-vous with little me,
Sitting naked on his knee,
Knowing he can wait a-while,
Before his loving makes me smile;
And, as he teaches me this truth,
He strengthens my mind against youth,
And so, he gives himself more time
To make me smile at each love crime...
- COMMENTS
melimelissa3 months agoAuthorCher M verbiage,
I think the problem may be earlier where I missed a syllable:
Sitting naked (up)on his knee,
Knowing (that) he can wait a-while,
The rest is all 8 syllables and same scansion
Thanks for your spot
Méli
verbiage553 months agoLove the content.
But keep stumbling over the line "He strengthens my mind against youth".
I feel like it a syllable long in your meter / rhyming scheme.
Also feel like there could be a more ambivalent way to express your view on "youth" here.
Such as "do I doubt the value of youth"
(Just a thought)
Tail_Gunner3 months agoAnother keeper !
............. From an "old" guy! ... we do it differently as the decades go by. ... in this case: the 'specialty' is a world class mustache ride !
Levi
