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Click hereWhat is the colour of Consciousness ?
Where is the Centre of the Universe ?
In a Singularity ?
Or a Point , Bindu , Particle ???
To a digitized bufoon this is substandard poetry
To an Enlightened Seer : the Source of all Wisdom !
Do not cast Pearls before Swine
They shall snootily upturn their snouts
& sniff " Substandard Poems " ?!?
" Crucify Him" screamed the Pharisees
"Substandard Poems" sniffs the digitized buffoon ........
.................Om
to espouse your philosophy on poetry and/or technique in a thread entitled poetry and technique
btw
I didn't vote here
I think you have a kernel of commentary on the state of poetic review and critique, but I find it a little lost among the presentation. It made me think, though, which might be part of the purpose all along.
in fact most pigs are smarter than a lot of swine but refuse to answer questions or comment on the state of the universe, a truly wise statement in itself!
Hard to do it right at any time... especially to anyone inclined to think poetry is for the feeble-minded :)