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A whole community
suspended in the air.
Strong, yet fragile,
a storm cloud could pass through
and leave tatters behind.
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Trixareforkidsalmost 10 years agoI can't see it
Or feel it. Whether it's an image or idea(l) you're trying to convey its not coming through for me. It feels like a stanza pulled from a larger piece to me.
Didn't grab me so I didn't vote.
